How Will We Be Remembered

We are becoming Symptoms of the Universe We humans must change http://www.thehighlanderspoems.com/life-6.php

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Mac Mcgovern

Date: 3/8/2010 6:52:00 PM

No truer words are spoken this day.

Date: 3/5/2010 6:37:00 PM

And life is a continuous series of change if we are to grow. Only way to make things better. What is this about you leaving The Soup? I hope it is just a temporary vacation. Karen

Simone Segal

Date: 3/5/2010 12:04:00 AM

A good old English here here!!! love Simone

Carrie Richards

Date: 3/4/2010 7:04:00 PM

Profound words in this short haiku verse! Well done, James! ~ Carrie

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/4/2010 3:54:00 PM

If there is a plan to do so .. maybe we could .. it has become necessary at this point in time.. a very poignant and powerful Sneryu James...luv.. Linda-Marie..

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/4/2010 2:50:00 PM

If we don't make some changes soon to protect our environment, we're history! You said quite a lot in this great senryu, James. Love, Carolyn

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/4/2010 1:57:00 PM

Change can be good...right...Keep the creative Senryu coming. Sara