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How Poetry Began

0ne Sunny day the angels sat, assembled on the clouds, Some played harps, others sang, they all looked very proud. A few were showing new wings, they’d just received that morn, Others cuddled angel babies that had just been born. Children jumping through the clouds, half flying they would run A day like this in heaven, was made for having fun Everywhere I seemed to look the clouds rang out for joy Until I seen one little cloud with just one lonely boy. The boy he held a paper and his feather was pure white He sat there very serious as he would think, then write. Dear child I asked what is it here that keeps you from the rest He answered I am writing poems and want to do my best. Poems I wondered, what is this? I knew not what he meant The little man then read to me, he was such a little gent. These words he read were different, yet somehow still the same They rang out more like music, which seem to be his aim. I wanted to help God out, when people are feeling sad If they had poems they just might, read them and be glad. The angel folded his paper, to earth he watched it glide And made it float and gently land at a Wiseman side. Now I asked, why did you send that paper down to earth? He winked and said this is the day of poetry’s great birth. That’s why we are all gathered here and celebrate this day When humans discover poetry, to help them on their way. Written by Brenda Meier-Hans 09.13.2014 For contest: How Poetry Began Justin Bordner

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Date: 9/16/2014 7:46:00 AM
You are just as that little angel kid who invented poetry, Brenda. You should win the contest, in my opinion.Tke it as a prize!
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 9/16/2014 9:06:00 AM
Thank you so much Mario and thanks for stopping by.
Date: 9/15/2014 7:46:00 PM
very creative attack on this assignment. this is a great piece for children or any age. Excellent. Congratulations. I am the winner though, I got to read this wonderful gem.
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 9/15/2014 8:20:00 PM
Ah Maurice that is so kind.
Date: 9/15/2014 5:05:00 PM
Brenda---think Kids Books -----if I had a kid and you had a book---I would would read it to them.
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 9/15/2014 6:13:00 PM
I have written a couple Jerry, almost had one published once but almost doesn't count. Maybe someday. I was actually thinking this would make a good one. I am very flattered that you toe me this. Thanks a bunch. XXXXOOOO
Date: 9/15/2014 10:44:00 AM
and long live poetry, Brenda,,especially if it as good as this...
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Date: 9/14/2014 11:36:00 PM
hey, I am glad to see this on the winners' list. Congrats to you. I wish he had been more generous with number placements!!
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Date: 9/14/2014 9:10:00 PM
this is so uplifting, Brenda.. sweet congrats
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Date: 9/14/2014 7:09:00 PM
Beautiful write Brenda....I loved the heavenly theme...Congrats on your win
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Date: 9/14/2014 6:29:00 PM
Brenda, I love this! You've created a beautiful imagery for the theme! I believe this is one for the winner's list.... I am sure! Thank you for visiting and reading "The Gift" I appreciate your kind comment too. Annalise
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Date: 9/14/2014 2:08:00 PM
wonderful take on the theme Brenda many congrats:-) Hugs Jan xxx
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Date: 9/14/2014 1:54:00 PM
Cöngrats for dis fantastic jaunty cool poem written in adorable rhyme. Poetry frm heaven eh.
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Date: 9/14/2014 12:49:00 PM
A beautiful take. Congratulations on your win. lots of love
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Date: 9/14/2014 11:38:00 AM
Great write, Brenda. I gotta to add this to my favourite poems list. Thanks for visiting my page. hugs......Sarpong
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 9/14/2014 12:24:00 PM
Thanks so much Sarpong.
Date: 9/14/2014 6:39:00 AM
Creative thoughts about the birth of poetry..Reads like a winner ..Way to go ..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 9/14/2014 12:25:00 PM
Thank you Sara.
Date: 9/14/2014 3:27:00 AM
A lovely entry for the contest Brenda!
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 9/14/2014 12:25:00 PM
Thanks Connie for your comment and for dropping by.
Date: 9/14/2014 1:52:00 AM
gosh you made a real story about it. GREAT imagination you have. So fine!!!
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Date: 9/13/2014 7:40:00 PM
So very fine and the conclusion is perfect. This is indeed a very fine poem!!
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 9/13/2014 7:59:00 PM
Thanks so much Robert. I appreciate your visit.
Date: 9/13/2014 4:41:00 PM
I like it, especially the last four lines, good job! :)
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 9/13/2014 7:58:00 PM
Thanks for reading this and commenting Ed.

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