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How Much Would You Sacrifice?

Beaten beyond recognition, No compassion for humanity; Nailed onto a wooden cross, For one and all to see They gambled for His lowly robe, With a spear, they pierced His side; "It is finished!"... He cried out, Then hung His head and died Would you sacrifice your child?, Take time to think it through; God sacrificed His (only) child, For the sins of me and you

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/27/2014 2:23:00 AM

Milton... CONGRATULATIONS:) on having your poem featured on the soups HOME PAGE. Goodnight poet friend <3 =LINDA

Milton Toran
Date: 4/27/2014 12:58:00 PM

Wow, thanks! I didn't even know it was featured until I checked my email messages. Thank you so much! Milt

Flora Mae Gudez

Date: 4/26/2014 10:26:00 AM

Milton, your poem enlightened me. Thanks for posting it. May God bless you always.

Milton Toran
Date: 4/27/2014 12:59:00 PM

Thank you so much! God bless U! Milt

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 10/8/2009 7:43:00 AM

I doubt anyone would make the sacrifice God made to save mankind and keep the doors of heaven open to us. This is a very sad but truthful and heartfelt write, Milton. Excellently penned! Love, Carolyn

Karla Null

Date: 10/1/2009 7:39:00 PM

You said it, he deserves all the praise...Karla

Marty Owens

Date: 10/1/2009 6:45:00 PM

This is a wonderful poem...would be great put to music...Marty Thanks for the comments on my 911 poem.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/1/2009 11:14:00 AM

It is mind boggling every time that I think about the sacrifice on both parts father and of son. I like the style in which you approached the subject. Keep writing. Sara

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/1/2009 10:55:00 AM

~~~Magnificent Milton~~~ Thank you for sharing this with us. Thank you for all your kind comments. Love, Carol