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How Hot Were We

How hot were we As icy night was turning frigid, The howling sounds made me rigid, Chilled the wine and lit candles, Passion in eyes he held me tight..... Palpitations, the breaths burnt..... Thumping hearts spurred the fumes... Ah the smoke detectors activated, Splashes of rain, To check...... how hot we had been ! Written July 31st, 2015 For contest "How hot was it" by John

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Date: 7/31/2015 5:19:00 AM
wonderful imagery dr Sharma - good luck in the contest this is hot hot hot:-) hugs Jan xx7
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