How Far?

I use my GPS to find my way to you Please let this love be true Left, right or keep straight GPS tells me which roads to take Each mile gone brings me closer to you I watch as the sun changes its hue My heart fills with anticipation "Take the exit right, go straight on. You have reached your destination." 747 miles, 12 hours alone in my car It was love that brought me this far.

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Debbie Guzzi

Date: 9/24/2010 4:42:00 PM

gotta love that device! welcome to the soup. stay safe! Light & Love

Kristi Hayner

Date: 9/24/2010 6:22:00 AM

LOVE your stuff, Monica! Thanks for the comment on my poem. That is really old news with me, currently in wonderful long term relationship.........just a freak accident.............but I am digging it!

Nick Bagnall

Date: 9/20/2010 4:34:00 AM

lots to like in here, nice littel love story - well done :)

Skat A

Date: 9/19/2010 12:10:00 PM

Enjoyed stopping by to say hi while reading your poetry, have yourself a wonderful day full of love & joy. Keep them smiles coming*luv ~SKAT

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 9/19/2010 9:28:00 AM

This made me smile this time-- sure illustrates so well how far we'd go for love-- very nice :) -- nikko ;)

Joyce Johnson

Date: 9/18/2010 10:18:00 AM

Wonderful new gadget to have. We had to use blind faith when I was young. Love, Joyce

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 9/17/2010 8:15:00 AM

thankxxx Monica for your sweet comment on "Intoxicating Italy".. my wedding photos in Italy are posted on my blog... just go to your member page...at the top click on blogs... then scroll down till u see a blog with my name next to it...click on it... once in my blog.. click photo tab..and my wedding photos will come up to view.. enjoy..we are only allowed to post 10 photos on site now... but we took hundreds while in Italy... if u ever take a trip.. go there .. luv..

Wilma Neels

Date: 9/16/2010 2:28:00 AM

Awesomely beautiful write you got here Monica.. ~ Wilma

Gail Blakeley

Date: 9/15/2010 6:12:00 PM

hey ! I like this one. As to boyfriends with bad manners..bet I can top yours..loved this boy..till I saw him picking his nose in a movie theater...won't even tell u where he put what he picked !! EWEEeee..... LOL

Sidney Hall Mad Poet

Date: 9/15/2010 4:38:00 PM

I knew after I told you haow i felt that you felt the same way too. :-) more poems more

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/15/2010 12:48:00 PM

Good luck in this love relationship...I am glad that I chose this one to read today...Thank you for stopping by, reading, and commenting on my work...I have read of the muscadine wine..My husband's aunt made some herself..I often wonder how often she drannk it..We usually just pick them off the vine and each them as a treat..I like them a little tart before they get totally ripe..Sara

Earle Brown

Date: 9/14/2010 10:41:00 PM

This is beautiful. You write life.

Whitney Lacey

Date: 9/13/2010 10:36:00 PM

thank you so much

Nicole Sharon Brown

Date: 9/13/2010 7:48:00 PM

I love this Monica! I love the techno writing as well as Cas! Thanks for your kind comments!

Cas Davis

Date: 9/13/2010 6:10:00 PM

A very nice poem, Monica. It's always interesting to see technology used in verse.

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 9/13/2010 4:39:00 PM

must be love

Joyce Johnson

Date: 9/12/2010 11:10:00 PM

Hope that GPS was working right. Cute poem. Welcome Monica to this poetry corner. I think you will like it very much. I am enjoying your poetry. Thank you for your kind comments. Love, Joyce

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/12/2010 9:59:00 PM

Nice, nice! Monica very cute and sweet,..p.d.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 9/12/2010 9:56:00 PM

enjoyed your creative write tonight.. Monorhyme is super poetic form and u have used it well in your luv poem..