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How Does the Moon Revolve

he reminded me of a tree feet rooted in the soil his gaze surveying distant hills that strained towards the sky she lived inside the house inside her head travelled instead in a chariot made from dreams sometimes he brought her gifts a bundle of beans a strawberry on a plate she would wait alone in her head as she gazed at the dead summer fire at times like this she could pull herself back to the front confront his world eat his offerings knowing that his mind was on lower things trapped in the vortex of their worlds a mutual gravitational pull each proving gravity wins every time over give and take after the funeral she dragged her chair into the garden with the weeds sitting alone and sipping her tea crosswords abandoned on her knee she hasn’t much to say these days her eyes gaze outwards now and yet i notice that her chair is set back towards the house the question is how does the moon revolve after the world is gone

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 5/2/2017 8:40:00 AM
This is lovely. A little sad and so tastefully done. You have a gift for this style. There is a deep back story here somewhere. Very nice! - Dean
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Jennifer Christie Temple
Date: 5/2/2017 1:22:00 PM
Thanks for reading and for the encouraging comments, Dean. People and relationships fascinate me. They are like oceans, we can only guess and imagine what moves below the surface. Jen
Date: 9/3/2016 1:04:00 PM
Very sad but well written, Jennifer. I hope it is fictional. Welcome to Poetrysoup.
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Jennifer Christie Temple
Date: 9/3/2016 4:01:00 PM
Thanks, Barry! Well, it's only based on my observations of a married couple that I once knew quite well so, in that sense, it is fictional. They may have viewed their relationship quite differently. Thanks for the welcome. :)
Date: 9/2/2016 1:18:00 PM
when any world disappears all that revolved around it is lost to its own place...my first thought after reading your poem jennifer..welcome to poetrysoup my poetic friend
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Jennifer Christie Temple
Date: 9/3/2016 10:26:00 AM
Yes, completely lost in an unfamiliar situation. Thank you for your insightful comment and for understanding my poem so well, Frederick. Thank you for the welcome too :)
Date: 7/23/2016 1:10:00 PM
Beautiful and very sad. Sounds like something personally experienced. Well expressed and well done.
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Jennifer Christie Temple
Date: 7/24/2016 4:11:00 PM
Thanks, Barry. Yes, based on a couple I knew. It's strange how love can be true and deep and yet so lacking in mutual understanding.

Book: Shattered Sighs