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How Does It End

Quill n hand Ink is black Words frothing Lost in thought Words breathed forth And set free Two souls meet Blend as one Passion ooze In the night Dim of moon Lust or love Writer knows He leaves it To our thoughts

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David Williams

Date: 3/7/2013 1:13:00 PM

belated congrats on your win...David

Connie Gildersleeve
Date: 3/7/2013 2:46:00 PM

Davis thank you for your congrats. Much appreciated. Warm Smiles, Connie

David Fisher

Date: 3/5/2013 8:09:00 AM

Way to go in the contest!

Connie Gildersleeve
Date: 3/7/2013 2:46:00 PM

Thanks David. Much appreciated. Warm Smiles, Connie

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 3/5/2013 7:16:00 AM

Congrats on your success with this form..new to me. BG

Connie Gildersleeve
Date: 3/7/2013 2:48:00 PM

Barbara thank you for your kind comment and for your congrats. Much appreciated. Warm Smiles, Connie

Lori Lucas Mcclure

Date: 3/5/2013 5:04:00 AM

Congratulations on your second place win with this amazing write! Lori

Connie Gildersleeve
Date: 3/5/2013 10:41:00 AM

Thank you Lori for your congrats. Much appreciated. Warm Smiles Connie

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 3/5/2013 1:48:00 AM

Congratulations once more Connie, this contest was beyond me xx

Connie Gildersleeve
Date: 3/5/2013 10:42:00 AM

Thanks Mandy for stopping by and for your congrats. Much appreciated. connie

Donna Jones

Date: 3/4/2013 7:26:00 PM

Congratulations..:-)

Connie Gildersleeve
Date: 3/5/2013 10:45:00 AM

Thank you Donna for your congrats. Much appreciated. Connie

Debra Squyres

Date: 3/4/2013 6:58:00 PM

I like this... "To our thoughts" .. good ending !! Congrats on your win !!

Connie Gildersleeve
Date: 3/5/2013 10:46:00 AM

Thank you Debra for your congrats. Much appreciated. Connie

Painted Hunter

Date: 3/4/2013 12:37:00 PM

Very cool one, Connie....Great Win!

Connie Gildersleeve
Date: 3/5/2013 10:49:00 AM

Caleb thank you for you comment. Warm Smiles, Connie

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/4/2013 10:09:00 AM

Hi Connie, this is a very nice and awesome win... always~ LINDA

Tahera Mannan

Date: 3/3/2013 9:55:00 PM

Warmest congrats on this super win Connie.

Connie Gildersleeve
Date: 3/4/2013 5:08:00 AM

Thank you for the congrats. Much appreciated. Warm Smiles, Connie

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 2/12/2013 7:16:00 PM

Thanks for reading my writes, I have enjoyed yours this evening. Light & love

Connie Gildersleeve
Date: 2/14/2013 9:45:00 AM

Thanks Debbie for stopping by and for your comment. Happy Valentine's Day. Warm Smiles, Connie

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 2/12/2013 9:12:00 AM

Lots of intermingling thoughts here. I enjoyed the imagery.

Connie Gildersleeve
Date: 2/14/2013 9:46:00 AM

Thank you Richard for stopping by and for your comment. Happy Valentines's Day. Warm Smiles, Connie

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/10/2013 11:06:00 PM

oooh, I love that one "words frothing" what a cool image. You did a great job of making a series of this form. Luv, Andrea

Connie Gildersleeve
Date: 2/11/2013 12:40:00 PM

Thank you Andrea for your comment and stopping by. I had fun writing in the Epi style. Warm Smiles, Connie

S.Jagathsimhan Nair

Date: 2/10/2013 6:07:00 PM

Thnx Connie for the visit. This is quite good!! Jag

Connie Gildersleeve
Date: 2/11/2013 12:41:00 PM

Thanks Jag for stopping by and for your comment. I appreciate it . Warm Smiles, Connie

Russell Sivey

Date: 2/10/2013 4:40:00 PM

This is a wonderful and tremendous entry into the Ellip contest! I have yet to make an entry but will do so soon! Yours is spectacular, I really enjoyed reading it this evening! What a fine piece, Great Work!!

Connie Gildersleeve
Date: 2/11/2013 12:44:00 PM

Thank you Russell for your comment and for stopping by. I really wasn't sure of the Epi style. But gave it a try. Warm Smiles, Connie

Roy Jerden

Date: 2/10/2013 3:23:00 PM

Reminds me of a SF story I read once where lovers used a drug called "merge", I think. It melted them down for a certain period and they oozed together into a single mass for awhile, the ultimate blending. Loved the poem.

Connie Gildersleeve
Date: 2/11/2013 12:46:00 PM

Did you not like the word Frothy?

Donna Jones

Date: 2/10/2013 3:11:00 PM

I liked this one..very nice

Connie Gildersleeve
Date: 2/11/2013 12:47:00 PM

Thanks for stopping and for your comment. Warm Smiles, Connie