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How Do You Like Them Apples

Oh looky here so fine tonight Look what the cat dragged in! I gotta say your timing’s right Didn’t think you’d show again To what do I owe this pleasure? Were ya just in the neighborhood? I’ve been hangin’ on forever Though I didn’t know if I should This one sided love is vicious I ‘got SUCH a mad crush on you! I admit I’m a bit suspicious Ya just ‘showin’ up ‘outta the blue’ I don’t wantcha to think I’m ungrateful I’ll take all I can get with you So “ how do ya like them apples?” Oh _______ please tell me you do!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 5/10/2017 11:18:00 AM
very nice
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Gayle Rodd
Date: 5/10/2017 12:15:00 PM
thx for reading :)
Date: 5/10/2017 9:05:00 AM
Fun one :)
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Gayle Rodd
Date: 5/10/2017 12:14:00 PM
:) we need these every now and then right?
Date: 5/10/2017 7:55:00 AM
almost thought that this was written with my cats in mind.... it definitely fits.. Enjoyed the read...
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Gayle Rodd
Date: 5/10/2017 8:10:00 AM
lol I didn't wanna 'out who this was about' so I'll just leave it at that! haha oh the pangs of unrequited love :D
Date: 5/10/2017 7:35:00 AM
Nice Gayle, this was fun to read and completely understandable. I love the language use in this it really adds a voice to the poem.
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Gayle Rodd
Date: 5/10/2017 8:10:00 AM
thx Chris!

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