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empty words without meaning words mumbled for mere formality lost in rolling endless echoes we understand the game and agree it's nothing personal just filler to mask the silence that besets us so we erect tall fences, add padlocks and answer the knock of only the rare few we keep it formal so not to muddy waters how do you do? is not a question our fine means I don’t want to talk or I’m not convinced you care don’t you see how we’ve become blasé or maybe just maybe we need to better recognize those pauses of genuine concern so a how do you feel? becomes a how do you feel about me? because I care and we can be friends Submitted on January 20, 2023 for contest HOW DO YOU FEEL sponsored by MYSTIC ROSE ROSE

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Date: 1/21/2023 12:47:00 AM
May your heart be blessed with wonders indescribable. God bless you dear friend. Love, Gina
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Line Gauthier
Date: 1/21/2023 6:13:00 AM
You are very kind, Gina ~ have a lovely day
Date: 1/20/2023 4:33:00 PM
A lovely poem Line….Debx
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Line Gauthier
Date: 1/20/2023 6:32:00 PM
Thanks, Deb ~
Date: 1/20/2023 2:05:00 PM
A lovely write/picture. I just had a dear friend hurt me more than words can say. Have a great weekend..................
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Line Gauthier
Date: 1/20/2023 2:10:00 PM
Ah ~ the people closest to us are the ones with the power to hurt us the most of course ~
Date: 1/20/2023 2:05:00 PM
Sad, how some move away from one another; it happens, but it's not always irreversible. Well penned.
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Date: 1/20/2023 2:10:00 PM
Very true, thanks ML ~

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