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How Do I Love Thee, Let Me Count the Ways

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This is my very first attempt at writing a sonnet. I remember studying them in high school but I have never attempted to write one.

How do I love thee? Let me count the ways. I love thee to the depth and breadth and height My soul can reach, when feeling out of sight For the ends of being and ideal grace. I love thee to the level of every day’s Most quiet need, by sun and candle-light. I love thee freely, as men strive for right. I love thee purely, as they turn from praise. I love thee with the passion put to use In my old griefs, and with my childhood’s faith. I love thee with a love I seemed to lose With my lost saints. I love thee with the breath, Smiles, tears, of all my life; and, if God choose, I shall but love thee better after death. (Response) What magnitude of love, thou hath for me A flowing fountain welleth up inside Overfilling my heart with love and pride Merely mirrors the love I share for thee Our two hearts were meshed by God's blessed grace Our love strengthens the tie that binds our souls Untempered by heaven, forever it grows Immeasurable love through time and space Countless stars will sleep, winds will rise and fall My darling, I thirst and hunger for thee Please bringeth forth thy love and comfort me The love we share encompasses all Such Divine love before unknown to man Such true love shall never be known again response to Elizabeth Barrett Browning's sonnet How do I love thee? Let me count the ways... Feb 12 2016 Blessed read as two syllables in line 5 14 lines - 10 syllables per line by Daniel Turner

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Date: 3/27/2016 5:22:00 PM
Great Poem.
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Date: 2/25/2016 1:59:00 AM
Every line is lovely and feels like true love, Daniel! Congrats to you...hugs, Rhonda
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Daniel Turner
Date: 2/25/2016 7:32:00 AM
Thank you, Rhonda. I had 4 of the very best teachers in the world. I owe it all to them. I appreciate you spending your time to read and comment. That is a fine looking young man in that photo, next generation writer? Peace my dear:)
Date: 2/24/2016 12:33:00 PM
Congratulations on your win! Beautiful!
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Daniel Turner
Date: 2/24/2016 12:35:00 PM
Thank you, Susan. You know I'm a big fan of yours. I take your compliments very seriously. Peace to you dear poet:)
Date: 2/23/2016 8:32:00 AM
Good Morning Daniel, Congratulations on your wonderful win. Love Linda
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Daniel Turner
Date: 2/23/2016 8:37:00 AM
Thank you, Linda. I owe it all to a very charitable group of friends. It was my very first sonnet and I was lost. With a little tutelage from friends, magnificent miracles can happen. Peace my dear and have a blessed day. PS. I've been trying to work a line into one of my poems about Harry Hines Blvd but haven't got it quite figured out yet but I will.
Date: 2/22/2016 10:47:00 PM
Congrats on great win with this superb sonnet Daniel..
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Daniel Turner
Date: 2/23/2016 7:40:00 AM
I'm not sure how you like to be addressed, so if it's ok I'll stick with Upma. I appreciate your kind words of support. You are always so complimentary. I really am grateful,Upma, for your continuous encouragement and friendship. Peace and be blessed:)
Date: 2/22/2016 2:59:00 PM
A beautifully written Sonnet response, Daniel. Congratulations to you for your Second Place podium win! Sanddra
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Daniel Turner
Date: 2/22/2016 3:04:00 PM
Thank you, Sandra. It was my very first sonnet. I owe it all to the people who helped me with the form, LIn Lane, S1, Nette Onclaud and Tim Smith. Without their guidance it would not have been possible. My words, their knowledge of form and syllable cadence. I reached out to them and they graciously helped with their advice.
Date: 2/22/2016 2:42:00 PM
You deserve all the credit for this lovely sonnet, Danny. I applaud you for trying the form and for a well deserved win. Congratulations.
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Daniel Turner
Date: 2/22/2016 2:45:00 PM
Thank you my dear, and you'll pardon my boldness. I will stick to my original statement as opposed to your modesty and grace. Thank you for all that you are. Peace:)
Date: 2/16/2016 7:05:00 PM
Beautiful response to a beautiful poem.
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Daniel Turner
Date: 2/16/2016 9:04:00 PM
Oui, c'est madame
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Jean Murray
Date: 2/16/2016 7:36:00 PM
Well, seeing as my first love quoted the first verse to me, it is only right and proper that you should quote the second, n'est ce pas?
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Daniel Turner
Date: 2/16/2016 7:17:00 PM
Thank you my dear. I was only thinking of you. Believe it or not, this is the very first sonnet I've ever written in my life. I had some very good teachers!!
Date: 2/14/2016 8:54:00 PM
This is beautiful. Good luck in the contest. Elizabeth Browning would be impressed. Love, Joyce
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Daniel Turner
Date: 2/14/2016 8:58:00 PM
Why thank you,Joyce. That's the nicest thing anyone has said to me in a long time. This is my very first attempt to write a sonnet and with the tutelage of a few friends here on the soup, I am quite proud of the way it turned out. Happy Valentine's Day and may you find peace, love and happiness.:)
Date: 2/14/2016 9:52:00 AM
and now, Danny, do you see the difference in the flow? It's perfectly adjusted, and you deserve an A!
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Daniel Turner
Date: 2/14/2016 11:03:00 AM
Yes, Thank you. I have now written my first sonnet, under the tutelage of three very generous people. It would not have been possible without your help. I will forever be in your debt. You have quickly become a "Georgia Peach," They don't come any sweeter than that!!
Date: 2/12/2016 5:20:00 PM
I love what you have responded Daniel. Check your syllable count as opposed to hers.
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Daniel Turner
Date: 2/12/2016 5:22:00 PM
Thank you, Tim. I appreciate your comments. I'm stretching my learning curve. LOL
Date: 2/12/2016 2:42:00 PM
fondness highlights this romantic piece, daniel.. well done, wow!..huggs
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Nette Onclaud
Date: 2/14/2016 10:07:00 AM
so smooth, daniel!... had to read this again.. wondering where the word ' bllessed ' is; nonetheless, a gem!
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Daniel Turner
Date: 2/12/2016 2:56:00 PM
I had to read your sonnets to figure out how to do it. Thank you for the props:)

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