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How Do I Look?

look at me and tell me that i'm not wrong. tell me that i'm not a liar, that i don't steal. look at me and tell me that i have much to look forward to tell me that i will be some one that i'm not alone. look at me and tell me that i'm a good person. tell me that i am nice, fun, and respectable. look me right in the eye. tell me you love me, that i shouldn't be afraid that i shouldn't cry mii eyes out. look at me from a distant. what do you see? now look up close. how is mii image? now look in mii mind. what does it tell you? no matter what view, angle, whether up close, or far away..... just look at me.

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Date: 8/23/2009 8:56:00 AM
Excellent Sunday morning poetry reading Hosea. Thank you for sharing your poetry. Hope your day will be brighter then your yesterday Hosea.Love, Carol
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Date: 8/22/2009 9:01:00 PM
love how your ask others to tell the truth about you.... its rear but beautiful thing when people do tell you about you, in a constructive way.. enjoy your night:)
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Date: 8/22/2009 5:06:00 PM
Nicely written. Keep writing. Sara
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