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Layin in my bed Just me, myself and I Thinking of the day ive had Makes me wanna cry Im questioned and accused Seems like all the time Lately I feel falsely accused of a crime I dont know how to change Or make it somehow better I want to make people smile Not bring stormy weather Please God help me find a way to heal I want to be my happy self But I seem to always get a raw deal My addictions dont help me much But its my cure for sadness I miss the ME I used to be And so does everyone else

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Nocturnal Poet

Date: 12/19/2013 11:11:00 AM

HEY JESSICA WELCOME TO POETRY SOUP AND REALLY LIKE YOUR FIRST POEM A LOT!!!!!!!!!!

Sheol Moribund

Date: 11/30/2013 3:41:00 PM

The world can be a cold and lonely place. The way you put that into a poem, is simply wonderful...great job!!!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/30/2013 6:27:00 AM

- Welcome to P-Soup, Jessika ! - Nice to read your first poem here. - Hope you will have much pleasure to be with us. - Wishing you good luck - have a nice day! - (Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours). - My first greeting to you from Norway. - I will come back to read more.... another day :) - oxox / /Anne-Lise :)

Seun Ogedengbe

Date: 11/30/2013 2:51:00 AM

Welcome to Poetrysoup. your poem is a good one.Though sometimes falsely accused, God will vindicate you.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/30/2013 1:24:00 AM

hello, Jessica , I like your first poetic piece on the site , A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@