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House of Cards

House of cards I. I fear the clock renders neither mirror nor dull glass. Like the Lilly it moves and grows and dies unseen by our distracted eyes, telling me nothing, moment by moment. Time, her only transgression is death-- quick, fluid, emaciated, withering and vast. II. I will touch the sun and every gray will taste my eternity. I will build Babylon with an edict, with an imperial deck of cards, screaming, hissing, blind, knowing. You taught me, after all. III. Prince, ha-satan, you laid the ruin track for me, taught me to accuse Love. You, grand inquisitor, pro-bono prosecutor, veiling the world again beneath fire, beneath scales under twisted mouth. IV. We once knew a peace under sun and rain. God offered the sun and the rain before snow fell from the evil tree, before acid dripped down and you, you, you, heard your name over and over again, and the madness cradled you in flame.

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Date: 7/1/2016 4:48:00 AM
This is phenomenal. Very well done, kept me and my ADHD hooked from start to end
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Date: 5/23/2016 2:36:00 PM
John Byrd, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :) Drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 5/23/2016 8:21:00 AM
That's the way to go! Congrats on your first entry and welcome to Poetry Soup, John. :)
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John Byrd
Date: 5/23/2016 1:40:00 PM
Thank you Moon Flower! Glad to be on board.
Date: 5/23/2016 6:30:00 AM
AweS0mE title, this is So easy to read. It's amazing to read epic free verse poems like this. Linda
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John Byrd
Date: 5/23/2016 1:28:00 PM
Thank you, Linda. I just finished reading your poem, The Rose. I particularly like the imagery of death there. The cadence and timing are quite good. Thanks again for your timely responses to my initial posts here! I'll be sure to read more of your work.
Date: 5/23/2016 6:30:00 AM
John B,, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@"
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