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The light shines down on darkened rafters The happy ending was for never after That house of safety moaning in silent sadness Residents that once danced Now shuffle in a trance It was never foretold or foreseen What came to be A surprise to the last of them Chased by those they created Punished by those that created them To some it seems like a golden paradise But to those that live there It’s like the closing maw of a diseased beast I suppose that's the curse of sanctuary They only last in fairy tales

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 6/22/2016 10:49:00 PM
NICE TO SEE THIS ONE AGAIN, DAVID. SKAT
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Date: 5/17/2015 12:14:00 PM
- Congratulations on your first poems here at P-Soup - A pleasure to welcome you, David :) - Hope you will find this page interesting and post many more thoughts and words in the future - Good luck :) - // Anne-Lise
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Date: 5/16/2015 2:35:00 PM
David, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 5/16/2015 8:21:00 AM
David, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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