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Hourglass' Curves

How I relish the unguarded movement Of an hourglass shaping your graceful curves, Framed on twilight's deserted backdrop. Three Line PoetryContest `` From a man's perspective 3/16/2015

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Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 3/20/2015 12:03:00 AM

Wow nette wonderful! Congrats on big win!

Tammy Reams

Date: 3/19/2015 9:18:00 AM

Congrats on your win.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/18/2015 11:40:00 PM

Nice win Nette...PD

Skat A

Date: 3/18/2015 11:09:00 PM

NETTE, CONGRATULATIONS, on your 3-line win :) ~SKAT~

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/18/2015 1:44:00 PM

nicely done, nette!! Glad to see you get this top win from Debs. Congratulations.

Paul Callus

Date: 3/18/2015 10:13:00 AM

Wow! This is a delightful way of framing graceful curves in the background of the mind! Congratulations on a most lovely and deserved win, Nette! Hugs // paul

Kp Nunez

Date: 3/18/2015 9:26:00 AM

Graceful words Nette. Congratulations!!! :) Kim

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 3/17/2015 7:46:00 PM

Alluring as always nette. Congratulations on your win. Light & Love

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 3/17/2015 7:41:00 PM

always lovely Nette with the way you curve your poems.. :)! MAbuhay ka!! :)! weeeeee, tuloy ikaw sa Tugue this lent?//olive eloisa

Olusegun Arowolo

Date: 3/17/2015 6:52:00 PM

Lovely piece,Nette.. Congrats on your superb win.

Kim Shaw

Date: 3/17/2015 6:42:00 PM

Congratulations on this fine win, Nette!! Lovely, memorable imagery. Hugs, Kimberly

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 3/17/2015 6:02:00 PM

Lovely, congrats nette. Barbara

Sandra Haight

Date: 3/17/2015 6:00:00 PM

Wonderful imagery, Nette. Congratulations on your fine win! Hugs, Sandra

Jan Allison

Date: 3/17/2015 5:54:00 PM

dropping back with my congrats Nette:-) Hugs Jan xx

James Peranteau

Date: 3/17/2015 11:33:00 AM

If the comment I'm about to make... if I made to a french girl in france; she would blush...here in the States, a woman may call me a 'chauvinist'. Yet, I must be me......Any woman with "an hourglass curve", would definately be; 'OVERGAURDED" (*smiles*)....by me ! Inspirational write dear poet...hope it does well in the three liner ! I'm a 'terse' poet, as I'm certain you know. Have a wonderful week my friend....much love, james