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Hourglass

Your granules of sand With an invisible hour band Perform miracles At time's pinnacles Narrow waist, wide bust, Broad hip-crust An appealing body A nonreactive mentality Putting the present in perspective History and mystery as an objective You say that existence is not forever. Transformation is life's endeavour.

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Date: 4/5/2024 7:13:00 AM
Dear Christuraj, enjoyed your poem with a great metaphor. I am back from my travel, was away from our site for a while - hope to see many more excellent poems from your gifted pen. Warm wishes ~
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Date: 2/12/2024 2:10:00 PM
oooh, I like this poem a great deal...describing the hourglass (a metaphor in and of itself of time) and your last line was powerful. Have to fave this one!
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