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Hounds Tooth

Out of her hounds tooth, slanderous slobber Utilizing her foot paws, she toenails the ice Transcending into the deep, would surely silence her Save her chattering mouth tick, accompanied by cracks Imagining each step twice, she cautions Daring looks backward for telling traces of breakage Evil had yet seen what lurks beneath Reels she, with pitch and rotation falls full Slipping into the creature’s fang, she rolls Unnerved, she hears the crunch of her rule, changing hands Matching her closed mouth to the pain Morph-inflicted through another, Oscillating she disappears immeasurably Near death returns to the belly If consequences denounced, are affirmed Naked will, is gliding through the torrential waves Grub-Broken spirit, is no longer her concern Terse, having but one breath to gasp Once tender morsels are regurgitated Reminders of a coward’s prayer Trip, fall silent amidst the internal hate Usurped they press forward, amongst forgotten names Rusty pieces dance between the guiles of myth Eventually Repositioning, once again Swallowed up by impregnated blame Twice In shadows, neath a flowing stream Obtuse this float, the entrails, tail and claw Gather near the bend of endless screams Evening tide the beast is but the devils dream There is not, in truth, just here, as all there is Heartfelt vile sup-positioning in formal fashion Encased in hollow howls of woe and misery Re-envisions untold atrocities here on planet passion Total Fiction Submitted for consideration in Deborah Guzzi’s “Something wicked this way comes” Contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 5/14/2009 12:00:00 PM
Dear Sandra,Congratulations on YOUR Well Deserved Win in Deborah's Contest Thank-YOU for YOUR Gracious Comment on my work English Language ( Part ! ) Eyem sew empressed with ewe four that Comet ALWAYS Yoe'res...HG
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Date: 5/14/2009 10:26:00 AM
Sandra, Congratulatins on placing in Deborah's poem. W-I-C-K-E-D Love, Dane
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Date: 5/14/2009 6:20:00 AM
Wow, that's it, that is all I can say... Wow! Congratulations on placing in the contest. This is a wonderful piece. Smiles from Lolita
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Date: 5/13/2009 11:50:00 PM
Congrats on your success in Debbie's contest Sandra Rgds Brian
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Date: 5/13/2009 6:51:00 PM
Congrats in your placement in the contest...Raul
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Date: 5/13/2009 4:32:00 PM
Marvelous verse! It was so hard trying to rank these wonderful poems. There was holocust, the horror of slavery, terrorists, heroin, pedifiles, wife beaters, BUT for shear horror ala Steven King you would have been #1. Love & Light Poetess
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Date: 5/13/2009 4:18:00 PM
Holey moley how did I ever miss this??? Congratulations Miss A. on your absolutely amazing win in Debbie's contest! Freakin awesome and extremely well deserved! Love, Shar
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Date: 5/9/2009 8:29:00 AM
yes an evil, lurking write! brilliant! love it! very, very talented, you are! Sandra!! Jim
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Date: 4/28/2009 7:58:00 PM
Thank God this is fiction, Alexandra. As always your writing is captivating, but I was a bit frightened too. I think you'll do very well in the contest with this awesome poem! Hope all is well with you. Love, Carolyn
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