Hotwired

Hotwired the orgasmatron headed out on sixty-nine know there’s nothin up ahead and even less behind. Pagination, pixilation nothing seems to work maybe just I’m gettin old maybe just a jerk off that is gee whiz can’t ya take a joke? Lost in smoke years since last toke days since last drink I think. As ya'll can see rhyme don't agree with me, so back to blank slate, mate and the cheque's on you. Iambic to the core commonman’s snore such a bore. Straight from the soul infinite whole or is that hole, wasn’t this supposed to be erotica? Never know have to go Now.

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Line Gauthier

Date: 5/18/2020 11:33:00 PM

I like the presentation of your short lines, it gives importance to each thought ~ Well done.

Debbie Duncan

Date: 6/17/2017 12:50:00 AM

Very nice write :)

D.W. Rodgers
Date: 6/17/2017 7:37:00 PM

Thanks Debbie

J Hamilton Gist

Date: 3/22/2017 8:20:00 PM

Crafty sportsmanship there mate.

D.W. Rodgers
Date: 3/23/2017 2:46:00 PM

Thanks JH

Carlos Coelho

Date: 3/19/2017 12:28:00 AM

Dave, I liked your poem, I was drawn in right from the first line and journeyed to the last line. Clever write and a fun read.

D.W. Rodgers
Date: 3/23/2017 2:45:00 PM

Thanks Carlos

Ralph Sergi

Date: 3/11/2017 10:12:00 AM

Hi Dave: Very clever play on words poem. I really enjoyed this poem. MY COMPLIMENTS!

D.W. Rodgers
Date: 3/11/2017 2:43:00 PM

Thanks Marvin

Jannie Breedt

Date: 3/11/2017 3:51:00 AM

Hoo yea! Felt like I was chewing gum as I went along skipping through this one. Brutal honesty and nice and naughty too. Loved it.

Marvin Whitfield

Date: 3/10/2017 9:53:00 PM

This poem has lots of humor in it. A warm personality with feelings. Very clever!

Carolyn Fish

Date: 1/5/2017 9:24:00 AM

Yes!

D.W. Rodgers
Date: 1/5/2017 12:38:00 PM

Thanks for dropping by

Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 11/12/2016 10:25:00 AM

Oh, Dave. You got the old lion laughing w/this wonderful poem. Great write, I'm sure every Vogon is proud of their adopted son. Love this poem though. Love and peace from the RW (Romantic Warrior.)

D.W. Rodgers
Date: 11/14/2016 9:49:00 AM

Thanks Freddie

Scott Thirtyseven

Date: 8/25/2015 8:01:00 AM

Well I'm in a spin. Great work, I think I want to play with this form myself. Thanks for the intro.

D.W. Rodgers
Date: 8/25/2015 10:36:00 PM

Thanks Scot, always good to play with different forms

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/22/2014 8:26:00 PM

thank you for the comment on my comment...PD

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/22/2014 1:09:00 PM

Aberfoyle.. Thank you for supporting one of my latest contest. Stop by and enjoy my latest blog ENCORE" if you'd like. Always & Forever <3 LINDA ;-)

D.W. Rodgers
Date: 5/22/2014 8:14:00 PM

Thanks Linda,

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 5/18/2014 10:37:00 AM

clever write Dave not a style I am know looks interesting though ty for visiting my page hugs

D.W. Rodgers
Date: 5/18/2014 6:08:00 PM

Thanks Shadow, not sure its my style either but sometimes fun to play. Cheers Dave