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Hotdogs On the Run

With Baseball hotdogs on the run Caught up in, excitement and fun Watch where you go Before you know You might slip and fall on your bun!

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Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 11/9/2019 9:39:00 AM

Ha ha funny good poem, Pat! Such frank en furter humor of spilled ink condiment truth. Jolly jubilant poetry. Love and more love always.

Pat Adams
Date: 11/9/2019 5:29:00 PM

Ha! Well, that was easy for you to say! Kind of hard for me to read though, truthfully. But, hey I do appreciate your commenting my friend!.....pat

Jan Allison

Date: 11/6/2019 6:14:00 PM

oh such clever word play pat lol:-) hugs jan xx

Pat Adams
Date: 11/7/2019 7:05:00 AM

Thanks Jan. I hope I'm not infringing on your territory!.............80)

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 11/6/2019 5:24:00 PM

Nobody wants a squashed bun! Fun one, Pat!

Pat Adams
Date: 11/7/2019 7:04:00 AM

That's right! (Neither one of em!).......pat

Chris Green

Date: 11/6/2019 4:55:00 PM

That's what I call "being frank". Fun one Pat

Pat Adams
Date: 11/7/2019 7:03:00 AM

Thanks Chris!.........80)