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Hot Water Spring

hot water spring's heat heals and cures sick and tired; energy not lost Haiku syllable count 5/7/5

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Date: 6/27/2014 11:25:00 PM
Mohan Short but with so much meaning and emotion. Thank you for the nice comment on my Colours poem.
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Mohan Chutani
Date: 6/27/2014 11:37:00 PM
Robin, thanks for reading my poem and also liking it. Haikus are meant to convey a lot in few words, esp. of nature, that is what I gather. Mohan

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