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Hot Summer

Hot summer hot summer Its hot summer Warm sunny day In a beach bay In winter I get up at night In summer I go to bed by day I love this season Because of a reason The reason is for Melon and mango Summer is ended by Autumn breeze To have more fun Enjoy the sun

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Date: 4/25/2016 7:53:00 PM
Harini, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Harini Manikandan
Date: 4/27/2016 10:40:00 AM
oh thank u skata i am so happy this is almost 5th poem iwrote my father only advised to post it in poetry soup
Date: 4/25/2016 2:22:00 PM
Hi Harini, Nice & amazing first entry. Welcome to poetry soup. Wish u a successful journey ahead........hugs
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Harini Manikandan
Date: 4/27/2016 10:41:00 AM
thanks
Date: 4/25/2016 7:53:00 AM
can you send a little of your sunshine over here please:-) lovely imagery made me feel bright and happy:-) hugs Jan xx
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Harini Manikandan
Date: 4/27/2016 10:40:00 AM
sure jan
Date: 4/24/2016 10:19:00 PM
Harini,, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 4/24/2016 9:25:00 PM
That's the way to go! Congrats on your first entry and welcome to Poetry Soup, Harini. :)
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