Hot Sauce

You tantalize senses Breaking down defenses You sting to attention Breaking all convention Caution this spice of life She will not make a wife

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Date: 10/25/2018 6:57:00 AM

I like it hot and the passion of fire is still going...Many wishes, Kai

Date: 4/12/2017 4:54:00 PM

Too hot to handle eh? You disappoint me James. How did the famous model Jerry Hall describe the perfect wife?

Just James
Date: 4/20/2017 5:38:00 AM

Jerry put it very well, i can concur!

Date: 4/5/2017 11:43:00 AM

ah i see you wrote a poem about me, how kind! you've been reading too much clitoria lol :)

Just James
Date: 4/5/2017 12:50:00 PM

You caught me out! Cayenne Charlotte ! Its got a ring to it!

Date: 4/5/2017 7:10:00 AM

Like the old saying (sort of) A nice place to visit but I wouldn't want to live there. Nicely crafted James.

Just James
Date: 4/5/2017 8:06:00 AM

Nail on the head!! Thanks for the visit Chris

Date: 4/5/2017 7:05:00 AM

Nice! :)

Just James
Date: 4/5/2017 7:08:00 AM

Thanks Maureen, and thanks for the visit.

Date: 4/5/2017 7:05:00 AM

she sure sounds hot hot hot James!:-) hugs Jan xx

Just James
Date: 4/5/2017 7:07:00 AM

too hot to handle!...:) Thanks for the visit my friend