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Hot Sand In Summer

Hot Sand In Summer Hot sand in summer Moon shines across the ocean Just like your kisses A peaceful evening Gently caressing my arms The shore swarms with love. Written: 2/22/15 Theresa Marie C.

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/8/2015 10:47:00 PM

this one I like a LOT

Julia Ward

Date: 5/31/2015 4:10:00 AM

A pretty senryu! Julia, :)

Jan Allison

Date: 5/13/2015 2:26:00 PM

oh Theresa these are so romantic:-) Hugs Jan xx 7 xx

Theresa Marie C.
Date: 5/13/2015 10:52:00 PM

Thank you Jan for your beautiful comment and especially for the 7.

Michael Dom

Date: 5/13/2015 8:09:00 AM

High five Theresa Marie - probably senryu though rather than haiku, cheers! :-)

Theresa Marie C.
Date: 5/13/2015 10:51:00 PM

Thank you very much Michael for the comment and also thank your for informing that it is a senryu, will change it. Cheers