Get Your Premium Membership

Hot Dog Breath

More green than orange or yellow rolling hills of trees take my breath as I speed the highway hot dog breath on my neck my eyes drift up to catch nature of change before my eyes speed seems required just as in spring the first day song spills out your windows into fresh air so I glide in my old fast car up the highway feels like skating Redd's got his head out the window.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 10/18/2010 6:21:00 PM
enjoyed reading today!
Login to Reply
Date: 10/18/2010 3:38:00 PM
I can see the scene..Sara
Login to Reply

Book: Reflection on the Important Things