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Hot Diggety Dock

Well hot diggety dock, a mouse ran up my clock Now that's quite a sight but it sounds like a crock Since the digital revolution Quite silly, what confusion Young'uns are thinking you guys need a doc © Jack Ellison 2015

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Laura Breidenthal

Date: 7/29/2015 5:10:00 PM

Love this one!! Really clever one here. Always, Laura :}

Jack Ellison
Date: 7/30/2015 6:33:00 AM

What can I say... you continue to raise my spirits every day!!! Love, Jack xxx

Carol Eastman

Date: 7/29/2015 9:51:00 AM

Mouse Power Lives! Our mice got a BIG grandfather clock for our house. Grandpa Troll loves it! So it's staying. Mice live in the thing! They pay their way by taking turns running up the works every hour as it chimes! One mouse for each hour striking. Honest! It's rather mezmerizing to watch. Beats the TV and it's silly commercial all to heck! We might just be setting a trend as everyone in town is visiting us, just to see it happen! And the mice are having fun. Another great news day! LOL...

Jack Ellison
Date: 7/29/2015 10:19:00 AM

Oh for the good old ding dong days, eh!!! Love, Jack the Oldster! xxx