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Hot Babe

a fireworks exploding in the sky hot sun dazzling beautiful looking into your eyes you captured me like a fire it radiates you the warmth inside a spark picked up sharing my warmth electrically divine for me you are a work of art inner vision masterpiece in leaving oneself wanting more, a heart on fire burning with desire, for the one burning hot like you

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 9/16/2013 5:49:00 AM
Hi Liam, Charming write..Nicely done my friend.. Ken
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 9/16/2013 6:41:00 PM
THANK YOU MY GOOD FRIEND BEAUTIFUL COMMENT KEN DEEPLY APPRECIATED
Date: 9/16/2013 12:52:00 AM
Beautiful romantic yearning for love, liam
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 9/16/2013 2:59:00 PM
THANK YOU KINDLY BEAUTIFUL COMMENT DEEPLY APPRECIATED
Date: 9/15/2013 10:53:00 PM
This captures the essence of yearning desire ..Beautiful : ) Magnifique!
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 9/16/2013 1:05:00 PM
YOUR COMMENT CAPTURES BEAUTIFUL MY FRIEND I THANK YOU DEARLY CHARMAINE HEARTFELT APPRECIATED HAVE A BLESSED DAY
Date: 9/15/2013 9:36:00 AM
you have become my "Picasso " or John Lennon " I am really in love with the words .
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 9/15/2013 7:08:00 PM
DAZZLING BEAUTIFUL COMMENT YVETTE I PASS A SMILE THANK YOU EVER SO MUCH DEEPLY APPRECIATED
Date: 9/15/2013 8:49:00 AM
liam, lovely write.... deep...thanks for the nice comment on my latest...Linda
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 9/15/2013 7:06:00 PM
LINDA THE PLEASURE IS YOUR BEAUTIFUL COMMENT THANK YOU DEARLY DEEPLY APPRECIATED

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