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Hot Air Rising

128 British dead And 2 more on the way. How many 'enemies' have been filled with British lead? Who are: The Rebels? The Freedom Fighters? The Allies? The Beasts? Whose bullets and bombs are better, What blood spilled more belovéd? Which tears are more treasured, When they all flow for loss. You tell me Could you decide the value of a death, Or does the T.V do your talking? Would you like to take the test of faith And walk into your house disgraced By soldiers filled with obstinate hate For you who just chose to live? You tell me Is it fair to point the finger When there's three pointing at you. And you don't even care to think About the lives of others on the brink. The piling bodies, their putrid stink Lingering, waiting for the winds of change, But there's only the breeze of bullets When the streets become a firing range. Now you tell me Is it just me, or are you able to see The hot air rising too. 10/7/2009

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Date: 7/6/2010 1:23:00 PM
The vivid imagery conveys your thoughts in a creative way. Congratulations on your win in Dane Ann's contest. Enjoy your success. Keep on writing. Karen
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Date: 7/6/2010 6:47:00 AM
Congrats Simon on your HM in the freedom and liberty contest with this outstanding write and honor.. with luv from the "Sweetheart" in Hawaii on vacation.. AlohA...
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Date: 7/6/2010 4:20:00 AM
Congratulations Simon on your win in Dane Ann's contest "Liberty and Freedom to Choose". Love, Carol
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Date: 6/1/2010 8:57:00 AM
love this one, it's not just you seeing this hot air rising,, life's going in plenty defferent directions
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Date: 6/1/2010 8:54:00 AM
love this one, it's not just you seeing this hot air rising,, life's going in plenty defferent directions
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Date: 6/1/2010 8:51:00 AM
love this one, it's not just you seeing this hot air rising,, life's going in plenty defferent directions
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Date: 6/1/2010 8:26:00 AM
True Christians don't go to war. Good one! (Matthew 26:52)
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