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Hot Air Balloon

Earthbound creatures they While I commune with the wind Drifting with my dreams

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 1/14/2011 4:05:00 AM
Congratulations Barbara on your win in SKAT*'s contest "Air Balloon Ride". Love, Carol
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Date: 1/12/2011 1:19:00 PM
Congratulations on your fantastic win in the contest, Barb! Love, Annalise aka (Audrey) Soup now has 2 Audrey Careys, hence the name change.
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Date: 1/10/2011 11:08:00 PM
Congratulations Barbara on your well deserved win in the contest of SKAT!
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Date: 1/10/2011 5:58:00 PM
Barbara,, Congratulations in the contest. enjoyed,..p.d.
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Date: 1/10/2011 12:34:00 PM
Super Haiku Barbara, many congratulations on your win in Skat's fine contest....:)
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Date: 1/10/2011 9:37:00 AM
Great imagination used..Congrats..Sara
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Date: 1/10/2011 8:00:00 AM
Drifting with my dreams.....love that line!! Lovely haiku!! Congratulations, Barbara!
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Date: 1/10/2011 7:20:00 AM
Congratulations, Barbara, I loved the metaphorical quality of this one. Luv, Andrea
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Date: 1/10/2011 3:21:00 AM
Enjoyed your haiku BG! Congratulations on your success in the contest ;-) WN
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Date: 1/9/2011 11:48:00 PM
Congrats BG on your super success in the hot air balloon contest with this magical piece luv.. enjoy another top ten victory with luv..
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Date: 1/9/2011 10:17:00 PM
BARBARA, CONGRATULATIONS!! ON YOUE WONDERFUL HOT AIR-BALLOON RIDE. HAD LOTS OF FUN READING EVERY ENTRY. THANK YOU~SKAT
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Date: 12/11/2010 3:49:00 PM
This one is mystical feeling. I really like it! Luv, Andrea
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Date: 12/10/2010 10:04:00 AM
Check that parachute, B, or stay asleep ... the balloon is frolicking over the deep ... of my affections. One love.
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Date: 12/8/2010 5:55:00 PM
breathless laguage, barbara.. thank you for your greetings regarding deborah's contest; much appreciated! .. nette
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Date: 12/7/2010 6:06:00 PM
It's almost like an out of body experience you are describing, Barbara. Lovely entry for the contest. Wishing you success! Thanks for stopping by today. Hope your weather is better than ours. Florida is c-o-l-d now! Into the 20s last night. Keep the warm fire in your heart burning and let those dreams elevate your spirits. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 12/6/2010 8:11:00 PM
Thanks Barbara, for allowing my entry a win in your contest, love your very pensive Haiku. Good luck. Luv Joy (Jew)
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Date: 12/6/2010 7:41:00 AM
Nice metaphor and personification of the air balloon, Barbara Good luck
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Date: 12/6/2010 6:26:00 AM
Good one ..Reads like success in the contest..Sara
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Date: 12/6/2010 6:18:00 AM
Interesting air balloon ride...images are dreamlike but real, enjoyed...always Michael
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