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Staring across a distant horizon Into the setting sun Holding hands Blazing beauty Hotly sizzling flames Eyes melt the soul Capturing beautiful In flickering feelings It radiates warm In deep happiness A spark picked up ignites Blazing emotions Desire electrically charged I see before me A work of art In a masterpiece Craving more To be Alight Completely on fire ~ ~ ~ ~ ~

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Charmaine Chircop

Date: 8/26/2013 3:34:00 PM

This beauty describes the enticing deep feeling towards someone with captivating eyes.Eyes are the mirror of heart and soul..So i bet there s more than eyes capturing your pulse rate.Sensusl and inspiring

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 8/27/2013 3:34:00 AM

the pulse is barely moving ha ha thank you ever so sweetly for the amazing beautiful comment deeply appreciated

Charmaine Chircop
Date: 8/26/2013 3:35:00 PM

sensual i meant..oops : )typo

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/26/2013 1:05:00 PM

...........hot......open up the window....lol ! - Well done, Liam ! - oxox // Anne-Lise ;)

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 8/26/2013 1:07:00 PM

thank you kindly for the sweet and beautiful comment deeply appreciated