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HOT! HOT! Inspiration? Low Humidity? High very high One really doesn’t feel like writing poetry But what does one do on a hot steaming day? I’ll tell you what one does not do – Work! Oh it’s a day for invention Conjure up something not too taxing on the brain Even the thought of mental effort is painful so Here goes There is a peaceful verdant cool valley Between two snow-capped mountain peaks – Mount Serene and Mount Bliss A frothing bubbling murmuring stream runs happily through a meadow I can hear the Tonkawonka song it sings as it splashes against the rocks (The Tonkawonka were a local Indian tribe now no more) It is beside this stream I have spread my Indian blanket set down my small ice chest just across the stream almost obscured by the rushes a young deer bows its head to drink I lazily uncap a cold beer – take a sip WONDERFUL! I lean my head back against a willow stump and Dream Not a cloud in the sky The heavens so blue it nearly hurts my eyes I close my lids Am just dropping-off when I have this waking-dream I’m in the city Tall buildings surround Eggs are frying on the sidewalk Sun beating down beating down I can’t stand it! This is a nightmare! I wake up This is no dream It is HOT!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 7/31/2010 8:16:00 AM
Excellent my friend! Masterfully done. I took a trip with you and never left the farm! (now I get to go out and play(work) in the 93 degree humid Florida heat. I shall try and keep your conjuring efforts in mind. :)
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Date: 7/10/2010 3:52:00 PM
I've been missing out a lot, Daver-not been able to visit more often because of school, but truly glad I came across this to lighten this oppressive heat. You described it pefectly. It is a nightmare! Looking for some rain today! Goes to my favs. Love, audrey
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Date: 7/10/2010 11:46:00 AM
"Absolutely" Daver! Thanks for gracious comment. This is a narrative of clarity in expression of a message, "The ultimate." Have you ever thought of maybe doing a blog illustrating this awesome technique? I think it would be of great value to others, and myself for sure, for the truck driver needs all the help he can get. In expressing the awesome message of his heart. Agape, Moses
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Date: 7/9/2010 3:11:00 PM
It definitely is!! Where isn't it not hot?? Need to go there ;) This is yet another write of yours that I am really enjoying--really love how you take me from hot-->to not---> to hot!!! you sure are one witty and clever poet, no wonder Andrea loves your writes!! and that is so cool that you like etherees too--am just discovering it :) well enjoy your Hot day, haha wonder when you'll be writing about the cold??? -- nikko :)
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