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This poem was written as a response to the confusion and exhaustion that caregivers feel when someone they love dies.
Her hands shook as they wheeled him away. Had his lips been dry? Had his body ached? Had he longed for a touch against his fragile skin? Could she have done more to relieve his pain? Could she have loved him more, needed him more, begged him more to stay? Her head swam in the deafening silence of guilt and sorrow as she buried herself for feeling relief.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 12/10/2017 10:10:00 PM
It is trying to serve parents alone when they become helpless. Other appropriate trained persons tend to make us feel helpless ourselves because we can no longer do what they do. Your poems are sad and speak the truth.!
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Date: 1/10/2015 10:54:00 PM
Rachel, Congratulations on having your poem featured on Poetry Soup's Home Page. Always & Forever ~LINDA~
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Date: 5/5/2013 7:54:00 PM
My brothers and I had so many questions as my Dad spent his last night in Hospice. I left an hour before he passed and thought I should have stayed a while longer. This touches.
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Date: 1/19/2013 9:03:00 PM
I enjoyed reading your poem, Rachel. Very good work. Love, Kim
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Date: 1/19/2013 6:00:00 PM
I know this scene all too well, Maria. This touched my very deeply. Also, I thank you for your kind comments on my poem 'Violin'. Elaine
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Date: 1/10/2013 9:04:00 PM
sad.....that is why we have to show more care to those we love.
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