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an example of how and where to use the various parts of a horse's body.

They were on the summit of the hill as if poised in a portrait. The breeze ruffling the stud's forelock and mane as he arched his head responding to the reins he moved on as his rider leant forward and rubbed his poll in affection. Tensed up his withers quivering he sprang into action careening down the slope pulling up lame. His rider dismounted and ran his hand down his legs finding some heat in the fetlock. Lifting his leg he found the cause a stone lodged in his frog, using his hoof pick he dislodged it thanking his lucky stars that it was not a pulled stifle. Checking his hind legs for heat in the hocks and gaskin he found all to be well. He patted his croup in affection and re-examined the front leg still a little heat but his coronet seemed fine. A week's rest should put him right allowing the bruised frog time to heal. It would be tight to keep him fit for their big show in three weeks time but a strained stifle would have put him out of action for at least six weeks. On foot he lead Silver back to the stables and there applied a poultice to his hoof which he would change daily until the frog recovered, leaving Silver munching happily on hay. He walked into the tack room and replaced his tack and stood admiring the rows of rosettes that lined the walls.. The upcoming show would give him the final proof of how superb he was and then people would flock to bring their mares to him and his line would be perpetuated long into the future.

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Date: 10/14/2016 9:12:00 PM
Wonderful write, Shadow, I'm going to try :) Hugs Eve 10++++
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Date: 10/3/2016 3:21:00 PM
My mother had horses but by the time we came along and she moved to the city we were just lucky to learn to ride. I just went riding in May for probably the last time for my 70th birthday. I wanted it to be memorable. I love horses, and my oldest daughter flew over to Hawaii to spend it riding with me and my youngest daughter. It was wonderful! You outdid yourself on this magnificent poem Shadow! Brava! ; ) 7 Connie
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Date: 10/2/2016 6:12:00 PM
You have great tension in the poem, Keeps one reading to see how it ends. Good job.vw5
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Date: 9/30/2016 7:43:00 PM
I grew up always having horses. My dad a trainer, and then in later years he taught children to ride western style (including my kids...his grandchildren). What a lovely poem from someone who knows the "ropes", ...nicely done, Shadow !
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Date: 9/30/2016 2:46:00 AM
What a beautiful read, I love horses. Thanks for that/|\
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Date: 9/30/2016 4:31:00 AM
ty for taking time to read Rick horses are superb hugs

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