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                Bay horse. Description, types, leaving and price of a bay horse ...

In deep of forest he roams with might A silken coat flaring through eve’s air; When moon casts boldness on a steed’s rite To journey free… far as runes declare, My horse totem enkindling power Directing flights in my younger days -- Where carousels merry blessed the hour This kinship granting me strength, ablaze: Flows his mane of auburn, a crown’s hue Resting kindly on marshes of land; A character known just to a few Is grace of friendship time could withstand : My spirit guide runs wild, yet he’s tame For vision of light two of us hold Through tenderness or speed, we inflame One hearth beaming on raced dreams…consoled! ~o~ For Dear Heart's Spirit Animal Contest 6/3/2020

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Date: 6/12/2020 10:40:00 AM
Nette, congratulations on your win in my contest with this beautifully penned poem. I love horses so this poem touched me deeply and I like your image of the horse too _Constance
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Date: 6/8/2020 3:29:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. A great write and picture to go with your poem. Enjoy your win and day..........
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Date: 6/8/2020 8:40:00 AM
A beauty through your words. Congratulations on your win Nette :) Much love
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Date: 6/6/2020 7:36:00 PM
I like your choice for spirit animal Nette. Good luck in the contest. Hugs Rick. p.s. I hope you will enter my current contest.
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Date: 6/4/2020 2:21:00 PM
Your words certainly do justice to the photo! Aloha! Rico
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Date: 6/4/2020 3:42:00 AM
Wonderful piece Nette. Beautifully done. Good luck Tom
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Date: 6/4/2020 2:03:00 AM
As usual, Nette, very poetic, words very skillfully used.
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