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Lost was I amidst the Scottish highlands The evening sky was blushing heaven-kissed Hilltops pierced the dusky fog like islands As soft a horse came swimming thru the mist Pausing to consider its intentions I stood there hypnotized and still as death Thus its beauty quelled my apprehensions And naught there was but magic in its breath Like the grand Bucephalus he gestured Nodding with his head for me to follow With the trails deep in the brume and vestured Held no greater hopes until the morrow Building in my gut were pangs of hunger Outside the hopes of finding further aid Sixty and not getting any younger My future hinged on choices to be made Little left to lose I started hiking Just steps behind the stallion as he led Even in the dark his hide was striking His color white as sheets and purely bred On we walked for miles through the night, dim Until I spied some farm lights further on Stopping to remember him and thank him But searching through the darkness ... he was gone. ~ 1st Place ~ in the "Some Paradise Where Horses Go" Poetry Contest, Michelle Faulkner, Judge & Sponsor. ~ 4th Place ~ in the "Eight Words Challenge - 24 Lines Maximum" Poetry Contest, Robert Haigh, Judge & Sponsor. ( Ten syllables/line, counted at HowManySyllables.com, no cliche's, via cliche' tool at PoetrySoup.com )

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Date: 4/4/2020 12:44:00 AM
This is pure magic, Greg. Your imagery is always striking, but here telling a tale of a mystical, kindhearted horse who saves your life then disappears. Exceptional poetry - congrats on your first place, my friend!
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Date: 4/3/2020 1:06:00 AM
Mystical journey, Greg with beautiful imagery - one of your signature qualities! Congratulations on your first place win!
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Date: 4/2/2020 9:38:00 PM
This is a real beauty Greg! A deserving first placement my friend. Your horse in this story sounds enchanting! Congratulations on your Trophy win! xxoo
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Date: 4/2/2020 6:44:00 PM
Congratulations on 1st place in my contest, Gregory, mystical write-
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 4/2/2020 7:44:00 PM
Thank you so much, Michelle - I am so pleased you enjoyed my poem! I have always loved horses, (especially Arabians), and riding them, and they will always be one of my favorite things. (There is truth to this story, too!) :o) <3
Date: 3/16/2018 4:51:00 AM
What a fantastical write! Loved the imagery and the end! Congrats!
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 3/22/2018 2:31:00 AM
Very kind of you, Kim - thanks so much! :-) <3
Date: 3/15/2018 9:18:00 PM
Wonderful imagery in your poem, Greg , and written very well using the required words. Congratulations on your win! Hugs ~`*
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 3/15/2018 10:44:00 PM
Many kind thanks to you, Eve, for your wonderful comments - blessings, friend! :-) <3
Date: 3/15/2018 7:18:00 PM
A very beautiful and mystical poem, Gregory, with many metaphorical thoughts to consider. Congratulations on your fine placement in the contest! Sandra
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 3/15/2018 10:41:00 PM
That's so sweet of you, Sandra, and I so appreciate it, my friend ... I'm pleased you liked it! :-) <3
Date: 3/15/2018 4:59:00 PM
Congratulations, Gregory, on a beautiful write.
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 3/15/2018 10:40:00 PM
Many thanks, Rhoda - blessings, friends! :-) <3
Date: 3/15/2018 12:28:00 PM
Mesmerizing story, beautifully written, Greg. CONGRATS! Janice
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 3/15/2018 10:39:00 PM
Thank you very much, Janice - blessings! :-) <3
Date: 3/15/2018 8:17:00 AM
A compelling read leaving plenty of room for speculation. Thanks for introducing me to Bucephalus, a new(B) for me from the annuls of history. Commendations on your win.
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 3/15/2018 10:39:00 PM
Thank you, my friend - I was fascinated with horses as a kid, ever since I read about Alexander the Great and his amazing horse, Bucephalus. Glad you enjoyed it! :-)
Date: 3/15/2018 1:04:00 AM
Congratulations, Greg on your win as usual with a cascading lovely poem.
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 3/15/2018 2:49:00 AM
Very kind of you, Subimal - thank you, friend! :-)
Date: 3/14/2018 4:13:00 PM
Back with congrats, Gregory. Great write. Congrats.
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 3/15/2018 12:13:00 AM
Many kind thank you's, Line! <3
Date: 3/14/2018 1:40:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Gregory! Wonderful poem :)
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 3/15/2018 12:13:00 AM
Very kind of you, Laura - thanks! :-)
Date: 3/14/2018 11:57:00 AM
what a mystical story you penned Greg I didn't realise it was for the contest until the end you wove the words in so well:-) hugs jan xx
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 3/15/2018 12:12:00 AM
Oh, that's so sweet of you, Jan, thank you so much! I'm pleased you enjoyed this one ... it was a bit different tack for me, and enjoyable! Blessings, Dear Friend! :-) <3
Date: 3/12/2018 2:35:00 PM
Awesome ghostly imagery. A beautiful poem, Gregory.
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Date: 3/13/2018 12:52:00 AM
That's very sweet of you, Line - thanks so much! :-) <3
Date: 3/12/2018 1:00:00 PM
I really enjoyed this, Greg, it created such a mystical feeling as I was reading. Best of luck in the contest !!
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 3/13/2018 12:52:00 AM
Thank you very much, Mike, I'm pleased you liked it, Friend! :-)
Date: 3/12/2018 4:09:00 AM
Loved this one, the highlands are beautiful but when the weather changes can be deadly. Good luck in the contest Gregory. Tom
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