Horse of John Doe

happy to comply denial of humanity what kind of game do you play? what kind of vehicle does it drive? never will this disappoint What will you find, is it toxic or alive? Will it fall short of expectations? Nameless woman in my hands now dies Timing is everything and she won’t help The horse I ride never goes inside It sprays and it poisons And it wires me till the end of the ride. end PLEASE COMMENT!! CONSTRUCTIVE FEEDBACK, (pos. or neg.) CRITIQUES, OR ANY SUGGESTIONS I also enjoy simple lists of words, descriptors of an abstract reaction describe the feelings or ideas my poem invoked or left in feeling or thought. Even on word. is better than none. Thank you