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What is it about
the horizontal line


that pulls us to it?

My ex-wife was
- (is) so fond of - 

Viewing the horizon
of sandy beaches
as if it was - (is) 
the edge of heaven

I also think I can
discern something,
something important,
distant - over there
So too, the long prairie
line to a blue storm
to come soon, tomorrow

It is no different, no 
more sure to allude,
in its poignancy
at the edge of vision

How's that for 
some poetic ending?

© Goode Guy 2012-12-09

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