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Hopelessness

How do we find our mental thread? Opening, unraveled, dead. Perusal of the darkest minds Eclipsing all the light that binds. Lingering hope will fill the air, Emptied by our own despair. Sensing that our time is near, Severed by our sense of fear, Needless of our empty souls, Endless misery unfolds. Sedated in a dark embrace, Savoring our hollow face.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 2/10/2010 8:09:00 AM
i love your writting dont change a thing i wish i had your mind and i am trying to find another great poem to print from you you are going in my favorite poets! for sure! =)
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Date: 8/31/2009 6:44:00 AM
Thank you for writing and sharing your excellent poetry with us today Syd. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/31/2009 5:55:00 AM
All is not hopeless even though it seems like it now. I like line five that it is our own despair. When it is our we have left God out. Sara
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