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Hopeless

Heart broken, grounds been laid, You did the crime, I'm who paid. No hand to hold, or shoulder for my tears; Only empty promises, and fulfilled fears. Wet pillow, no chance to dry, Nor an incentive to stay and try. Sadness and sorrow is what surrounds, Find a way to turn it around. Efforts lost, not noticed at all, He won't catch me, but will watch me fall. Years wasted, empty inside, Call it quits, or keep my pride? So much conflict, filled with self pity, Then he comes in and says sorry. Too weak to put up a fight, Pretend it's ok and just say good night.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 3/26/2016 2:39:00 AM
Elle Dee, you did well in responding in such a way. SKAT
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Date: 3/25/2016 10:48:00 PM
Elle,, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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