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Hopefully Hopeful

It started in the night the stars the cars It started on the balcany the sight the fright It started with the adrenaline Yet soft and free It started with the boy only around the bend The move was love the toy that destroys The action was glue to follow the move The end was me and you......

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Date: 7/6/2014 4:11:00 AM
Beautiful. Well-written - write more, please? You are a great writer. Thanks for commenting on my poem many yearz ago! hehe have a sun-shining summer. Stay cool.
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Date: 6/29/2010 7:55:00 PM
NICE ONE, ENJOYED THIS WRITE-SKAT
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