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Hope To See

Eyes closed tight I hope to see A sight to please me, flowers may be A fairytale castle, A knight on a horse Please make it nice, not horrid please just two massive daisy's would be fine A mound of chocolate , new handbags may be ? new shoes or a pile of cash Please make it nice, not horrid please if you cannot I'll understand, just make sure my mate skat's around comp entry 14042016 wrote in 1st person pd

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Ralph Sergi

Date: 4/20/2016 7:39:00 AM

Congratulations on a very descriptive poem, Steven.

Stephen Pennell
Date: 4/20/2016 9:44:00 AM

thank you for stopping by and your remarks stephen

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 4/19/2016 11:01:00 PM

Congrats on ur awesome win stephen..

Stephen Pennell
Date: 4/20/2016 2:43:00 AM

thank you for your comments, and stopping by stephen

Jan Allison

Date: 4/18/2016 12:23:00 PM

love your interpretation of the image - I know I commented on this before as I remember the line about Skat - looks like the PS gremlin struck again:-) hugs Jan xx

Stephen Pennell
Date: 4/18/2016 2:08:00 PM

yeah i saw it to, its vanished was there before yeah skat and pd are famous made 3 of my poems two where limericks mind lol

Bl Devnath

Date: 4/18/2016 11:45:00 AM

Congrats on your beautiful win with this beautiful pictured poem my lovely friend. Loved always, bl

Stephen Pennell
Date: 4/18/2016 12:15:00 PM

thank you for stopping by stephen

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/18/2016 1:51:00 AM

This was mighty interesting Stephen:), Congratulations on your awesome entry for my PICTURE contest. Thank you for keeping it under 10 lines... Stop by my latest blog "Photo Questions" and enjoy my take on the same picture of "Lilly Covering Her eyes." I wrote a little something myself. Enjoy if you like. Always ~LINDA~

Stephen Pennell
Date: 4/18/2016 3:07:00 AM

no Heroic Crown of Sonnets here pd roll on the next pd contest thank you will do x