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Hope of Seeing Santa

In the desert of her mind thoughts flood amongst the scatter of the stories told stretched along with the truth skirting reality or maybe romancing wishful fantasy Lights of green and red illuminate the night as curious eyes try to remain actively afoot creaks with each hourly strike has hearts beating in anticipation of capturing a mere glimpse Shadows harbor hope as crystals float blanketing the barren backdrop with care but weary souls cant hold on any longer and are relegated to retreat until dawn Dreams drift of sugar plums and proof Another year dear Santa remains aloof

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Date: 12/26/2016 12:28:00 AM
That is such a true picture you draw here with words, my friend. It comes alive, I can see it happen. I love it. Merry Christmas, Tim.
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Date: 12/25/2016 11:13:00 PM
Bah Humbug! A whole lotta proof will help you dream:) Merry Christmas Tim:)
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Date: 12/25/2016 8:56:00 PM
A very captivating write my dear friend, Tim. I hope to see Santa, too. Have a Very Wonderful and Blessed Christmas to you and your Family! Hugs! love lots, Leonora
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Date: 12/25/2016 2:48:00 PM
I wasnt naughty..So I saw Santa : )..Coming down my chimney top ...Lovely poem: )
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Date: 12/25/2016 8:49:00 AM
Merry Christmas, from the Grinch, great write!
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Date: 12/25/2016 4:38:00 AM
A delightful write, Tim. Last night my g'daughter Valentina left some things for Santa....this morning the milk was all drunk and most of the carrot had been eaten!:) Regards // paul
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Date: 12/24/2016 3:53:00 PM
foiled again! Magic, and a magical poem. Hoppy Hollyday ~ j
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Date: 12/24/2016 3:52:00 PM
Nice one Tim :) Merry Christmas.
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