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Hope of Renewal

As the last rose petal falls swiftly down The last of the great roses of summer What a great summer that was lived_you known Rose had much character an affirmer Fall approaches with sure desolation Only bare branches with prickly thorns left Mocking Bird nest with nesting cessation Protected by the Rose as in a cleft Used up_bare waiting for winter's cold breath Not knowing what this winter chill will bring As the petals flood onto the ground_death Hope awaits but winter comes with its sting Will the sap rise again coursing through vine Revitalization __ one bud sure sign

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 11/7/2010 8:15:00 AM
startling for an end of a season but rejuvenating its youthful appearance from the offshoot of another tiny bud as a sign of new hope, very nice message about nature and change, congratulaltions on winning this contest, Sara. (^_^) Noel.
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Date: 10/30/2010 9:15:00 AM
Congratulations on your fourth place win with this wonderful Sonnet. Caryl
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Date: 10/29/2010 1:49:00 AM
wonderful peace my friend
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Date: 10/27/2010 11:11:00 AM
Congratulations Sara on your win in John Freeman's Sonnet contest. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/27/2010 11:04:00 AM
Congrats Sara on your win with this inspiring sonnet --I think your last couplet ended this really nicely :) --nikko :)
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Date: 10/26/2010 9:02:00 PM
A lovely sonnet Sara. Many congratulations for this win.
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Date: 10/26/2010 6:51:00 PM
There is hope in the end lines of this lovely thoughtful poem! Well done, Sara. Congratulations! ~ Carrie
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Date: 10/26/2010 6:26:00 PM
Congratulations on this well deserved win, Sara
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Date: 10/26/2010 6:23:00 PM
Sara, Congratulations on your win! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 10/26/2010 5:55:00 PM
Congratulations Sis on your poem's success with the top winning circle. Enjoyed this beautiful poem's content. Aga;pe, Moses
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Date: 10/26/2010 5:51:00 PM
Congrats Sara on your winning poem in Moses contest with this brilliant write and exceptional entry luv.. enjoy another sweet victory my friend ..hope u are pain free today luv..
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Date: 10/16/2010 10:30:00 PM
This is beautifully written, Sara. You have great range in poetry. Have a great weekend, and thanks for my congrats on When You Think of Me.
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Date: 10/14/2010 8:15:00 PM
Hi, Sara"wow! your spell bounding words are captured perfect in this poem. A little sad with happy spirited emotions to go through. Amazing with them deep thoughts. But, like you said at the end, ( one bud sure sign )I really did enjoyed the ending. take care,..p.d.
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Date: 10/12/2010 3:22:00 PM
Sweet Sonnet to the Fall and bye to Summer .. but this refreshing poem makes me happy even though I am a summer girl.. hope u are well today .. we are preparing for Eric's leaving tomorrow night.. ho hum.. again...
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Date: 10/12/2010 3:14:00 PM
Thank you for your kind comment on "A dark Place"...I aspire to be as creative as you are within your writing Take care Paul
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Date: 10/12/2010 8:06:00 AM
Beautiful description of the rose fading as winter approaches. Surely it will rise again come spring! Great work, my friend. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 10/12/2010 7:36:00 AM
Smile ~ "Christ the Messiah;" did "Your Beauty" know that? ~ Again, always good to see "Your Preciousness" &, "Beautiful Poe" ~ "My Love & Warmth to 'You Always' &, All You Love, 'Forever,'" John! ~ Smile, "Have A Very 'Blessed & Beautiful' Day 'Dear, Lovely Sara Kendrick,' Amid The Sweet Fragrant Petals of, 'The Roses Bloom; Beautiful Love;'" Bye, "Dear Precious Lady!:) ~
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Date: 10/12/2010 7:30:00 AM
Smile ~ "There 'You Are' Dear, 'Lovely, Precious & Gifted Sara Kendrick!!!'" ~ What a profoundly reflective & soulful poe my dear lady; very pretty ~ "Thank You," for stopping by & for "Your Beauties" kind & thoughtful com &, "Yes," a single pearl is an amazing thought indeed but, such is "The Beauty of 'Our Father!!!'" ~ Did "Your Treasures" know that, I once beheld years ago "Heaven," descending upon the face of the earth &, I even stood amid its midst with ~ ....Cont:)
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Date: 10/12/2010 6:49:00 AM
That alligator was trained by a bad dog. when they had the parade on Saturday, there was a box alligator in the road some one mad and we put it in our car to use later. It was made well. That is what gave me the idea.
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Date: 10/12/2010 6:24:00 AM
The very beauty of the Shakespearean sonnet, Sara
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