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Hope Is Still Alive

The moon still circles the earth, and tidal flows never cease. But as wildlife goes extinct, our anxieties increase. The sky's still robin egg blue, and honey still tastes as sweet. But our cities are dirty, and garbage litter the street. Flowers still grow gorgeous blooms, and the rain still brings water. But most animals at large are pets or those we slaughter. The sun still rises and sets, and the seasons come and go. But we've squandered a treasure our children will never know. Hope is still alive; within the trusting eyes of a child. But once it's neutered and tamed, their world will never be wild. (Quatrain) 9/3/2015

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Date: 3/13/2018 2:39:00 PM
Strong message - "Yet where is all the wildlife our children will never know?" Well done, Emile.
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Date: 3/13/2018 3:09:00 PM
Thank you Line, I appreciate your continued support and friendship my friend, Emile.
Date: 9/4/2015 12:28:00 PM
You have a distinct style, Emile. Loved how you weave one observation with another thought which makes the reader think for every stanza. I think this is for a contest, so best to you! hugs!
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Date: 9/4/2015 12:43:00 PM
Thanks so much Kim, I appreciate both your flattering comments and your visit. Emile.
Date: 9/3/2015 3:10:00 PM
Dear Emile, i loved this beautiful rhyme and the message....we have to gift our future a livable planet....we need to act in this regard....beautifully penned and picture is too good too....love,Anu:-)
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Date: 9/4/2015 8:03:00 AM
Thanks so much Anulaxmi, I appreciate both your friendly comments and your visit. Emile.
Date: 9/3/2015 1:37:00 PM
enjoyed this rhyme, the last stanza was very deep in meaning.. enjoyed Emile
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Date: 9/4/2015 8:02:00 AM
Thanks Poet Destroyer, I appreciate your comments and visit. Emile.
Date: 9/3/2015 12:01:00 PM
- Yes, it's really beautiful ....... but, a little sad to think about the children's earth in the future - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/3/2015 12:14:00 PM
Thanks Anne-Lise, I appreciate your visit. Emile.
Date: 9/3/2015 9:46:00 AM
Beautiful ... CayCay
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Date: 9/3/2015 12:14:00 PM
Thanks CayCay, I appreciate your visit. Emile.

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