Hope

You see hope when two kids share marbles between a volatile border. Date: 16/06/2017

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Gregory Richard Barden

Date: 10/10/2017 12:53:00 AM

Amen - blessings and congratulations on your win, my friend! :-)

Teddy Kimathi
Date: 10/17/2017 4:35:00 AM

Thank you for your warm applause, Gregory! :-) Be Blessed!

Eve Roper

Date: 10/9/2017 8:03:00 PM

Congratulations on your win, Teddy. Hugs Eve ~`*

Teddy Kimathi
Date: 10/17/2017 4:34:00 AM

Thank you so much for your applause, Eve! *^_^* Be blessed!

Constance La France

Date: 10/9/2017 2:26:00 PM

Teddy, congratulations on your win !

Teddy Kimathi
Date: 10/17/2017 4:31:00 AM

Thank you so much, BW! I really appreciate it! *^_^*

Alexis Y.

Date: 10/9/2017 7:40:00 AM

Wow! Teddy, I agree with this well written one-liner. When I read it, I instantly thought about the song " The Greatest Love Of All " by Whitney Houston. Congratulations on your 1st place win. I appreciate that you participated in the contest:-) Alexis

Teddy Kimathi
Date: 10/17/2017 4:27:00 AM

Whitney Houston is one of my favorite singers of all time! Thank you so much Alexis, for your warm applause and enjoying my write! *^_^*

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 10/9/2017 7:34:00 AM

Wow! Kids are our promise, usually torn only by their parents! Congrats, Teddy!

Teddy Kimathi
Date: 10/17/2017 4:24:00 AM

You're right, Kim! Thank you so much for your kind applause! *^_^*

Sandy Tadros

Date: 8/23/2017 6:00:00 PM

These words are so powerful!

Teddy Kimathi
Date: 8/27/2017 6:48:00 AM

Thank you, Sandy! *^_^*

Jannie Breedt

Date: 7/8/2017 1:13:00 PM

Lovely monoku Teddy well done.

Teddy Kimathi
Date: 7/9/2017 5:15:00 AM

Thank you so much, Jannie! I really appreciate it! :-)

John Hamilton

Date: 7/2/2017 5:46:00 PM

Belated congrats on POTD Teddy, hope sure is needed, sometimes children can teach us a lot!

Teddy Kimathi
Date: 7/5/2017 3:48:00 PM

Thank you so much John, for your warm applause!! Lolest, it's never late to applaud anyone!! :D

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 6/19/2017 12:01:00 AM

What a vision this conjures Teddy! Congratulations on POTD of the day with this beauty,! ; )

Teddy Kimathi
Date: 6/20/2017 4:31:00 AM

Thank you so much, Connie!! *^_^* Children are our hope in manifesting peace...

Joseph May

Date: 6/18/2017 8:28:00 PM

Congrats on Poem of the Day Teddy

Teddy Kimathi
Date: 6/20/2017 4:28:00 AM

Thank you so much, Joseph!! :-)

Heidi Sands

Date: 6/18/2017 5:24:00 PM

Back to say Congratulations Teddy :)

Teddy Kimathi
Date: 6/20/2017 4:26:00 AM

Thank you so much, Heidi. I really appreciate it!! *^_^*

Sara Ella

Date: 6/18/2017 2:00:00 PM

Yes! This is truth! <3 Congratulations on this wonderful poem. :)

Teddy Kimathi
Date: 6/20/2017 4:25:00 AM

Thank you so much for your kind applause, Sara!! *^_^*

Eileen Manassian

Date: 6/18/2017 1:16:00 PM

Isn't that the truth. :) Congrats, dear. Lovely piece deserving of POTD.

Teddy Kimathi
Date: 6/20/2017 4:23:00 AM

Hi Eileen. Thank you so much for your applause, and enjoying my line!! *^_^*

Daniel Turner

Date: 6/18/2017 1:15:00 PM

A wonderful thought Teddy. Congratulations on POTD:)

Teddy Kimathi
Date: 6/20/2017 4:21:00 AM

Greetings, Daniel. Thank you so much!! :-)

Darren White

Date: 6/18/2017 12:24:00 PM

Wonderful PotD Teddy! COngratulations :)

Teddy Kimathi
Date: 6/18/2017 12:28:00 PM

Thank you loads, Darren!! *^_^*

Akkina Downing

Date: 6/18/2017 12:17:00 PM

Congrats Teddy on your great POTD. Keep hopes alive :) hugs

Teddy Kimathi
Date: 6/18/2017 12:27:00 PM

Long live hope!! :) Thank you so much Akkina, for your kind applause!! *^_^*

Sunita U.D Palawon

Date: 6/18/2017 8:40:00 AM

Conveys an important message. Hope the world ponder upon this. Well penned. :))

Teddy Kimathi
Date: 6/18/2017 12:25:00 PM

I hope so too, Sunita. Thank you for reading and enjoying my monoku!! *^_^*

James Inman

Date: 6/18/2017 8:28:00 AM

Beautiful Teddy

Teddy Kimathi
Date: 6/18/2017 12:18:00 PM

Thank you so much, James!! ;-)

Charlie Smith

Date: 6/18/2017 6:46:00 AM

Yes you do, congratulations Teddy on POTD honors...

Teddy Kimathi
Date: 6/18/2017 12:16:00 PM

Thank you so much Charlie, for your kind applause!! ;-)

Agnes Krampe

Date: 6/18/2017 6:35:00 AM

Congrats on POTD, Teddy. Beautiful thought.

Teddy Kimathi
Date: 6/18/2017 12:15:00 PM

Thank you so much, Agnes!! *^_^*

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 6/18/2017 6:26:00 AM

Brilliant and beautiful Monoku, a fave. Congratulations on potd! xomo

Teddy Kimathi
Date: 6/18/2017 12:14:00 PM

Thank you so much, Maureen!! You're so kind!! *^_^*

Shreastha Vyas

Date: 6/18/2017 6:03:00 AM

Really beautifully explain

Teddy Kimathi
Date: 6/18/2017 12:12:00 PM

Thank you so much, Shreastha!! *^_^*

Lin Lane

Date: 6/18/2017 6:02:00 AM

Recognition deserved so that many others may read your Hope, Teddy.

Teddy Kimathi
Date: 6/18/2017 11:41:00 AM

Thank you so much, Lin!! You're too kind!! *^_^*

Teddy Kimathi

Date: 6/18/2017 5:57:00 AM

A BIG thank you to TPS for featuring my work as the POEM OF THE DAY!!! :-)

Jan Allison
Date: 6/18/2017 6:22:00 AM

BRAVO TO TPS!

Jan Allison

Date: 6/18/2017 4:59:00 AM

WOOHOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO Many congrats Teddy I am absolutely delighted for you:-) hugs Jan xx

Teddy Kimathi
Date: 6/18/2017 5:38:00 AM

I'm really speechless!!! Thank you so much Jan!!! I don't think it would be rated that highly, if it wasn't for you.... You're so kind!!! *^_^*