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Phoenix appears Arising from fiery flames Our hopes are assured Contest Hope Sponsor Nayda Ivette Negron 04~30~16

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Vladislav Raven

Date: 5/4/2016 6:12:00 PM

Hi Jan, a beautiful Senryu written on the theme of Hope. I didn't place either Jan, in the contest. Hope is one thing i ever have in abundance. Your words are hope and hope is something we shall ever need, it keeps us going forward. Another excellent poem Jan. This is a Seven. Hugs....Mike. XX

Jan Allison
Date: 5/4/2016 6:17:00 PM

Thanks Mike as long as I am inspired to write that is the important thing - i have written inspired by the families contest but have no put it in the contest as it is not what the sponsor is after ... but as long as we are creative that is all that matters:-) hugs jan xx

Arthur Vaso

Date: 4/30/2016 10:42:00 PM

I just read Tim's poem, Seems we having a silent BBQ this weekend!

Jan Allison
Date: 5/1/2016 8:18:00 AM

My poem is of hope Arthur nothing more nothing less:-) hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/30/2016 6:14:00 PM

Great job. If they only knew!!!

Jan Allison
Date: 4/30/2016 6:26:00 PM

I think they do now lol:-) hugs jan xx

Anisha Dutta

Date: 4/30/2016 11:27:00 AM

Nice composition Jan.Congrats Hugs

Jan Allison
Date: 4/30/2016 2:34:00 PM

Thanks Anisha - I didn't place in the contest but am happy with my poem i think it is quite uplifting:-) hugs jan xx

Daver Austin

Date: 4/30/2016 10:59:00 AM

I hope this is a strong presidential candidate. We seems to need one. Love, daver

Jan Allison
Date: 4/30/2016 2:32:00 PM

I hadn't thought about it in that context Daver but it sure fits the bill for the elections:-) hugs jan xx

Tim Smith

Date: 4/30/2016 9:53:00 AM

A great Senryu Jan...love the pic too

Jan Allison
Date: 4/30/2016 10:50:00 AM

Thanks Tim - I snook in at no 34 then the contest closed 5 mins later! Hugs Jan xx

Sneha Rv

Date: 4/30/2016 8:30:00 AM

How fantastic!! I was reminded of Fawkes looking at the picture.. Good luck in the contest, dear Jan; hope this does very well!! :) :)

Jan Allison
Date: 4/30/2016 8:33:00 AM

Thanks Sneha:-) I wasn't going to post it until tomorrow then saw there was only two spaces left in the contest! I hope Nayda likes it:-) hugs Jan xx