Hope

Hope I can't take it, Hope I make it, This road is rough, I'm the one who made it tough, Why don't I listen, Their words could make my life glisten, My stubbornness has got to go, If not, it's my life that I will blow, My dreams were within my means, I didn't reach high enough it seems, I'm going to make that change, every little bit, I want to make it!

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Skat A

Date: 7/3/2016 1:02:00 AM

DONNA, enjoyed reading your poem, thank you for sharing your thoughts through words. *SKAT*

Eric Boddie

Date: 8/1/2015 5:24:00 PM

hope is only as strong as the hoper....who can gain additional strength by a helping shoulder....a crutch or a backbone is what some will call it....if you don't believe me, just ask any alcoholic....lol

Brenda Meier-Hans

Date: 9/23/2014 2:29:00 PM

You can do it Donna. Congratulations on your win.

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 9/23/2014 6:37:00 AM

Congrats on the win, Donna

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/22/2014 9:33:00 PM

Donna, Congratulations, :) enjoy your win, and stop by my latest blog "We Will Never Know" if you have time, or if you'd like. Always & Forever ~LINDA~

Casarah Nance

Date: 8/29/2014 8:10:00 PM

Keep fighting for what you want and you will be happy when you reach it!