Submit Your Poems
Get Your Premium Membership


Quote of the Day

Quote Left"The harder you work, the luckier you get."Quote Right

by Gary Player

  |  Comment

Hope

Carl Fraser Avatar  Send Soup Mail  Block poet from commenting on your poetry

Below is the poem entitled Hope which was written by poet Carl Fraser. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

Read Poems by Carl Fraser

Best Carl Fraser Poems

+ Fav Poet

Hope

As i step into this morning madness
I catch a glimpse of the cold iindifference,
The ultimate sadness
The substitute phoney smiles
Trying to hide in the erosion of  the chaotic miles
Still i reach out
Just one warm heart 
Will hope survive another day?
Will it pass my way
Or stray
Lost  in the concrete maze
With all those trapped in the frozen gaze
Still i reach out
Can just one warm heart be found
Before it all comes crashing  down
They keep missing the signs
Ignoring  time to tow the line
Conforming to all that our society defines,
Until you have yours
And i have mine
Still i reach out
Amidst all my doubts
That there is one warm heart 
That will not flee
And will turn about
And finally see 
The real me.

Post Comments

Please Login to post a comment
  1. Date: 11/12/2013 12:53:00 PM
    Beautiful poem Carl - full of meaning. Without hope tomorrow dies, yet life is too wonderful to live in 'phoney' existence. Nicely done! soupmail.

  1. Date: 11/11/2013 1:54:00 PM
    Keep looking! The Grateful Dead sang "Don't tell me this town ain't got no heart - you just gotta poke around). You can find some good people in the metropolis. Stimulating poetry here! Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish

  1. Date: 10/19/2013 10:42:00 AM
    Carl i see exactly what you write here, and agree with all,, glad i read this,, thanks for posting...

    Fraser Avatar Carl Fraser
    Date: 10/19/2013 2:28:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks for readin Harry, always appreciate your input, Carl
  1. Date: 10/13/2013 3:54:00 PM
    I'm along for the ride, if we so seeing the hope it'll crash for sure. I love your wordplay, Mr... The emphasis on 'iindifference' itself is mesmerizing! Thank you for the visit... I know there's something beyond us, at least in capabilities. Laws of physic twisted as simple as blinking, makes me post-skeptic!

    PAPYRUS Avatar KEITH PAPYRUS
    Date: 10/13/2013 3:54:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    stop steering...typo
  1. Date: 10/12/2013 4:20:00 AM
    Hmmm...I enjoy reading your poem. Its beautiful. Yes Hope can survive eternity. If there is no hope everything will come to an end.

    Fraser Avatar Carl Fraser
    Date: 10/19/2013 2:30:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Christine, sometimes hope is all one has, thanks for reading