Hope

hope means to desire to wish for something I desire the ability to hope for peace as one wishes for love in their life who has nothing I give hope to people without release that they can live an easier life each day I desire the ability to hope for peace no more, for men, women and children, death the price to pay this is the prayer of hope that they can live an easier life each day why do we have waring factors throughout the globe why do we have to threaten, why not desire peace this is the prayer of hope so let us all wish for our prayers to be pleas cant we all live together peacefully why do we have to threaten, why not desire peace hope comes in so many forms hope means to desire or wish for something cant we all live together peacefully as one wishes for love in their life who has nothing November 15 2012

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Sean Goodwin

Date: 11/28/2012 10:55:00 AM

This is not an easy form to try out but I think you handled it superbly. I really enjoyed the wonderful thoughts that you have penned here. -- Sean

Seren Roberts
Date: 11/28/2012 12:40:00 PM

Thank you Sean glad you came by to read it.........Seren

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 11/18/2012 8:12:00 AM

A fine sentiment the answer is because of greed..that's why. Light & Love

Seren Roberts
Date: 11/18/2012 6:59:00 PM

Thats true , the wanting what others own, thanks for stopping by...Seren

David Williams

Date: 11/17/2012 7:48:00 AM

hey Seren this is very good! you are only over the mersey from me..David

Seren Roberts
Date: 11/17/2012 11:40:00 PM

Am in south wales david. Sister in Connah's Quay. Thanks for the comment. Seren

Len Gasun

Date: 11/17/2012 4:28:00 AM

Great and a very lovely poem which uplifts one's spirit, Seren! I love it! Good luck! Thank you so much for your congratulatory comments on my win. love/hugs:) Leonora

Seren Roberts
Date: 11/17/2012 5:57:00 AM

Hello Leonora, as long as it is enjoyed thats all that matters. ...Seren

S.Jagathsimhan Nair

Date: 11/17/2012 12:43:00 AM

love the message, well said, good luck if for any contest:) Jag

Seren Roberts
Date: 11/17/2012 5:58:00 AM

Thanks Jag ....Seren

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/15/2012 2:51:00 PM

Reads like winning material.Good luck in the contest..Your stopping by with congrats was uplifting..Sara

Seren Roberts
Date: 11/17/2012 5:56:00 AM

Thank you Sara .....Seren

Harry Horsman

Date: 11/15/2012 2:29:00 PM

Seren, this is an inspiring poem, and i just love it..

Seren Roberts
Date: 11/17/2012 5:55:00 AM

Thank you Harry. Glad you did, thats what matters, that people enjoy your write. Not whether its contest material. ...Seren

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 11/15/2012 12:15:00 PM

very nice my girl , love it .xx

Seren Roberts
Date: 11/15/2012 2:00:00 PM

Thanks Mandy, found it difficult but had to try...Seren

Leo Larry Amadore

Date: 11/15/2012 11:04:00 AM

"Hope is the thing with feathers/ that perches in the soul/ and sings the songs without the words...." Enjoyed the thought and good intentions in your poem.

Seren Roberts
Date: 11/15/2012 11:07:00 AM

Thank you Leo ... Seren

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

Date: 11/15/2012 9:22:00 AM

Dear Seren, Hope this finds YOU and YOURS Healthy and High in the Spirit. So very nicely done Terzanelle I hard Form to adhere to YOU have done an Excellent job with the Flow and the Message Superb Pen Thank-YOU for YOUR Gracious comment on my work LOVE ALWAYS and FOREVER YOUR Eternal Liege...HG

Seren Roberts
Date: 11/15/2012 11:06:00 AM

Thank you HG for stopping by and commenting. .... Seren

Wilma Neels

Date: 11/15/2012 4:49:00 AM

Seren, I love the message in your gem. What you say is so true as well :)

Seren Roberts
Date: 11/15/2012 11:05:00 AM

thank you so much Wilma ... Seren