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Hope

Life’s encompassing goal Seeks to make the soul a whole, In a hope to regain What is its true frame, Created as one Torn apart to almost none, It dies within the depression of time Losing itself is its only crime, No control that it has Makes the loss only last, Seemingly longer With no way to grow stronger, In the hope from a moment Flies a peaceful comet, Returns the soul From bitter pieces To once again a whole A lifelong lesson it teaches.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 10/17/2010 8:24:00 AM
excellent write here my friend thank you duncan
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Date: 10/16/2010 5:27:00 PM
Soulful weave of words and theme, savannah.. well deserved fetured poem of the wek.. all my best, nette
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Date: 10/15/2010 11:29:00 AM
Savannah, Congratulations! On having your poem featured this week. A poem well deserved, keep the fascinating poetry coming" Nathan D."
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Date: 10/15/2010 9:23:00 AM
GOOD MORNING! SAVANNAH, CoNGRATULATIoNS ON HAVING YOUR POEM FEATURED THIS WEEK*luv~SKAT"
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Date: 10/13/2010 1:06:00 PM
Savannah, hello & Congratulations! On your awesome & well done poem being featured this week: ) have a nice one,..p.d. "
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Date: 10/12/2010 6:51:00 AM
Congrats on having your poem being featured on the Poetry Soup home page this week. Please keep your creative caps on, let your poetry pen keep painting your poetry pads with colors of creativity. Thanks for sharing this with us and have a wonderful week ahead. Love always, Adeleke
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Date: 10/11/2010 5:53:00 AM
Congratulations on your wonderful poetry being featured this week Savannah what a great way to have it seen. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/10/2010 12:05:00 PM
Many congrats on your feature this week. Rgds Janette
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Date: 4/4/2010 7:46:00 AM
May our Lord bless you and yours on this Easter Day Savannah. Love Carol and Family
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