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Hope

Streets filled with hopeless regret kids with lives their tring to forget brothers wasting valuable time only to further see their demise hope is the brother that dosent give up to always go strong even through tough hope is the teenage girl with a baby yet even through her tears she earns an education these streets of misery and lost souls are filled with satins red hot coals Satan loosen your grip from my brothers mind so that they will not see your hateful demise

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 5/1/2009 4:14:00 AM
tevin, you are a powerful writer! love it! and thanks for comments! Jim
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Date: 4/13/2009 2:02:00 PM
Interesting perspective in this poem. Through the tough times, it is important to hope. Good message here. Welcome to Poetry Soup! I hope you enjoy your time spent with us. Thank you for taking time to comment on my poem. Keep on writing! Karen
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